上纽大申请文书范文(共3篇)

本文共计2076个文字，预计阅读时间需要9分钟。

上纽大申请文书范文 第1篇

有些申请人在文书中没有很清晰地描述出自己的目标专业以及未来的研究方向和职业规划，而是对一些与专业无关的事情高谈阔论，让招生官看不到申请人对目标专业的理解和研究，必然以申请失败收场。

申请文书顾名思义就是要帮你获得申请结果的材料，那么这个申请必然要围绕一个专业来进行，这个专业就是你的目标专业。既然以这个专业为核心开展，那么我们的文书都要围绕着这个主题来体现。也就是说，在你的文书中要利用有效的文字去告诉招生官你在专业上有过怎样的建树，你以及你的推荐人对于你个人的专业研究潜力是怎样评价看待的。

【长篇大论、拖沓冗长】

有申请人在写个人陈述的时候，思绪一打开就收不住，写完就超过1500字了。要知道，在招生官审核材料的最忙碌的阶段，过长的文章是没有人愿意也没有时间耐心读下去的。

对于申请研究生的学生来说，课程和研究兴趣是最关键的因素。如果你的个人陈述说了三件事情都是为了说明一个问题，那么为什么不选出一个最具代表性的说明呢-这样会让人觉得你写东西抓不到重点。因此申请文书切忌拖沓冗长，精练、直观、材料支持有力就足够了。

A Home Destroyed

I was seven years old when I saw the ocean for the first time. My grandmother had invited me to visit her near Okinawa, Japan. I will never forget that encounter—the intense sun, the endless horizon, the infinite shades of blue that dissolved any boundary between sky and waves. And most of all, the secret of the water. Swimming in those waters was like diving into a kaleidoscope, deceptively plain on the outside, but a show of colors on the inside, waiting to dazzle me, mesmerize me. Those colors! Coral reefs—pink, green, red, purple—covered the seafloor; streaks of sunlight illuminated them, the swaying water creating a dance of hues. And weaving in and out of the contours of coral swam brilliant fish that synchronized every movement with the water, creating one body, one living entity. I longed to join and flow with them to the music of the waves; that’s where I felt I belonged. And leaving was like parting home, not going home.

Five years later, I returned. At first, all seemed to match my memory: the crystalline waters and that open horizon with the sun daring to come closer to Earth. But the second I dove in, I knew my home had vanished?white. That’s all I could see around me: bone-white death. I couldn’t accept it. I kept swimming farther out, hoping to catch even the smallest hint of color. But there was no sign of that brilliant garden I remembered, just fragments of bleached coral. It was like looking down onto the aftermath of a war: a bombed city, with only the crumbles of cement to testify for the great buildings that once stood. But who was the culprit behind this egregious attack?

Though at the age of twelve, I couldn’t even begin to guess, I now know the answer is us. Humans are an impressive species: we have traveled to every continent, adapted to countless environments, and innovated to create

comfortable means of living. But in the process, we have stolen the colors from nature all around the globe, just as we did that coral reef. Our trail of white has penetrated the forests, the oceans, the grasslands, and spread like a wild disease. I, too, have left a white footprint, so I have a responsibility to right

these wrongs, to repaint those colors, and to preserve the ones that remain. Some question why I should care. The answer is simple: this planet is my home, my birthplace. And that, in and of itself, is an inseparable bond and a timeless connection. Nature has allowed me my life, so I have no right to deny its life. As Jane Goodall once said, “If we kill off the wild, then we are killing a part of our souls.” This is my soul—our soul. I know that I alone cannot protect this soul, so I will not make a promise that I cannot fulfill. But this promise I will make: I will do what I can do.

上纽大申请文书范文 第2篇

Harry Bauld在他的【On Writing the College Application Essay】一书中罗列了一些老生常谈的主题，建议申请者在动笔之前谨慎考虑是否要在这些主题上动笔。这些主题是最经常出现的主文书的主题。

重复率第一的是一次旅行改变了我的一生，连结尾都是高度相似，每一场不同的旅行似乎都能在一夕之间开拓眼界，醍醐灌顶，改变人生。在历年的上纽和昆杜文书中，我就发现很多学生写到了出国旅游、夏令营、夏校开阔了他们的眼界，让他们认识了世界，理解了多元文化，更加珍爱中国的传统文化，同时锻炼了英语能力。当你们在热火朝天地创作时，我可以想象招生官读文章时候的无聊。

重复率第二的是体育运动。基本的套路是从小开始练习，有过失败与成功，在最重要的一场比赛中，因为伤病失利，曾经想放弃这个爱好，但是最终还是克服了困难东山再起，拿下了又一个重要比赛的奖项，用事实告诉了自己，坚持才有胜利。写体育爱好其实是不太讨巧的，因为体育爱好的故事往往会以输赢为结果，这个主题所能留出的反思空间并没有太多。

重复率第三的是单次的社团活动，这两年在江苏省出现得比较多的是模拟联合国的主题。曾经入围上纽A、B档的同学反馈，至少在上纽，这两年写模拟联合国的同学在初审阶段被“毙”的几率极高。主要是因为这个主题在美本申请文书中已经是用滥的梗了，要写出新意是非常困难的一个挑战。

重复率第四的是低配的个人陈述，属于那种只会被看五秒钟的类型，这些文书通常是这样开头的，“Hello, my name is…..”，稍微好一点的会这么写，“I am a very unique person with many interests and abilities and goals.”再高级一点的是，“I come from a close-knit family. I have a very close relationship with my parents and siblings, and I’m the eldest to enjoy much the care and joy”。

这些套路的致命伤是主题的重复程度高，招生官已经厌倦了这些主题。通常来说，一个招生团队如果是五个人，在一个月内（按25天，每天十小时算）要看完3000套文书共6000篇文书的话，在每篇文书上停留的时间大概平均只有分钟，如果算上看其他的成绩、推荐信、奖项、社会活动证书等的时间，如果在开头的部分还没有写出新颖的地方，这些套路文书基本上就可以被判决死刑了。

上纽大申请文书范文 第3篇

个别同学把别人的科研实习经历都安在自己的身上，从材料上看，这个学生看似有着极为出色的背景，他也可能会被一个不错的大学录取甚至获得全奖，但是到校一学期后他的真实水平就会显现出来。美国大学对于这种弄虚作假的行为甚为愤慨，会责令其退学。

美国大学教授希望通过申请文书了解真实的你，而不是一个编造的虚假人物。因此我们要本着诚实的态度去写自己的申请文书。除此之外，千万不要在文书中假设太多，因为假设永远只是在一定条件允许的情况下才能成立。文书还是要回归实际，以强有力的客观依据让学校认识到你的实力。