剑桥雅思11小作文考官范文(共4篇)

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剑桥雅思11小作文考官范文 第1篇

Task：Some people believe that the increasing use of the computers and the mobile phones has a negative effect on young people’s reading and writing skill，do you agree or disagree?

Sample answer：

Some educators have warned that the prevalence of mobile phones and the internet has a negative effect on adolescents’ academic ability. I agree with this view.

Firstly, the wide use of “Internet English” is regarded as the culprit of the declining writing skills. One obvious reason is that young adults may make some grammatical mistakes unconsciously because of the frequent use of improper abbreviations and punctuation on mobile devices, and this might pose a threat to their future career where a professional writing ability is required in most companies. Therefore, many linguists have expressed their concerns that the instant messaging and chatting on mobile phones might harm the ability of using formal written English.

Secondly, the poor reading proficiency can be put down to the frequent use of technologies as well. Compared to the older generation, young people today are cluttered with different gadgets, like iPad and iPhone. For instance, with easy access to wifi, they can surf the internet anywhere and anytime to follow the latest information of their idols in another country. However, most social network deliver fragment and useless information, which not only steals time way from solitary reading but also undermine the ability to think independently. In my opinion, this phenomenon should be reversed as soon as possible because reading has a profound effect on a nation’s future.

In conclusion, while these electronic devices make the communication much more convenient, I am in the camp that they might affect young people’s academic performance negatively.

好，以下是官方提供的高分范文，逐段分析，给各位烤鸭看看，到底雅思高分作文长什么模样 ?

, children have begun studying foreign languages at secondary school, butintroducing them earlier is recommended by some educationalists. This policy has been adopted by some educational authorities or individual schools, with both positive and negative outcomes.

剑桥雅思11小作文考官范文 第2篇

话题：The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

范文：

The table gives information about poverty rates among six types of household in Australia in the year 1999.

It is noticeable that levels of poverty were higher for single people than for couples, and people with children were more likely to be poor than those without. Poverty rates were considerably lower among elderly people.

Overall, 11% of Australians, or 1,837,000 people, were living in poverty in 1999. Aged people were the least likely to be poor, with poverty levels of 6% and 4% for single aged people and aged couples respectively.

Just over one fifth of single parents were living in poverty, whereas only 12% of parents living with a partner were classed as poor. The same pattern can be seen for people with no children: while 19% of single people in this group were living below the poverty line, the figure for couples was much lower, at only 7%.

剑桥雅思11小作文考官范文 第3篇

话题：The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011.

范文：

The table compares the numbers of people who cycled to work in twelve areas of the UK in the years 2001 and 2011.

Overall, the number of UK commuters who travelled to work by bicycle rose considerably over the 10-year period. Inner London had by far the highest number of cycling commuters in both years.

In 2001, well over 43 thousand residents of inner London commuted by bicycle, and this figure rose to more than 106 thousand in 2011, an increase of 144%. By contrast, although outer London had the second highest number of cycling commuters in each year, the percentage change, at only 45%, was the lowest of the twelve areas shown in the table.

Brighton and Hove saw the second biggest increase (109%) in the number of residents cycling to work, but Bristol was the UK’s second city in terms of total numbers of cycling commuters, with 8,108 in 2001 and 15,768 in 2011. Figures for the other eight areas were below the 10 thousand mark in both years.

剑桥雅思11小作文考官范文 第4篇

为了方便广大考生更好的复习，综合整理了雅思口语实用攻略：考前如何调整状态，以供各位考生考试复习参考,希望对考生复习有所帮助。

雅思口语考试历来是中国考生最担心的一关，虽然时间短，但是考核的时候要面对面，这无疑会产生紧张的心理。以下是名师总结的在雅思口语考试中一些考生常会提及到的问题，包括雅思口语考试的高分技巧，希望这些总结能对大家的复习有所帮助。

一、虽然雅思口语考试在听说读写四项中是最短的，只有10-15分钟，但是很多中国考生依然经常把它看成最大的障碍。主要原因是什么？

答复：大部分考生在口语考试里面临着如下问题：

1. 心理过度紧张，缺乏自信。

有些考生性格内向，不善交流和表达，面对临煞有介事的考官会大脑短路，语无伦次。

2. 英文能力有限，准备压力大。

07年以来雅思口语新话题层出不穷，考官第三部分的谈论愈发灵活，如果考生不懂得将话题化繁为简归类总结，会感到复习范围无边无际，从而忐忑不安。

3. 错把口试当成背诵考试，适得其反。

很多考生会把口语预测话题写成段子死背硬记，结果考试时不懂得与考官交流，只管猛背答案，往往是答非所问，难逃低分命运。

话题：The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.

提纲:

Introduction: rewrite the question statement in your own words.

Overview: point out which category was highest in each year, which was lowest, and which saw the biggest changes.

Details: compare the 3 categories in 1995, then say what happened up until 1999.

Details: notice what happened to local calls from 1999 onwards, and contrast this with the other 2 categories. Finish with a comparison of the figures in 2002.

范文：

The bar chart compares the amount of time spent by people in the UK on three different types of phone call between 1995 and 2002.

It is clear that calls made via local, fixed lines were the most popular type, in terms of overall usage, throughout the period shown. The lowest figures on the chart are for mobile calls, but this category also saw the most dramatic increase in user minutes.

In 1995, people in the UK used fixed lines for a total of just over 70 billion minutes for local calls, and about half of that amount of time for national or international calls. By contrast, mobile phones were only used for around 4 billion minutes. Over the following four years, the figures for all three types of phone call increased steadily.

By 1999, the amount of time spent on local calls using landlines had reached a peak at 90 billion minutes. Subsequently, the figure for this category fell, but the rise in the other two types of phone call continued. In 2002, the number of minutes of national / international landline calls passed 60 billion, while the figure for mobiles rose to around 45 billion minutes.

is not restricted to …，but is also evident among … 某一现象并不仅仅局限于…，而是在…中也很明显

be economically independent 经济上独立

recognition 认知，可以替换argue, believe等词用来表示人的观点

earn a living 谋生

have personal resources to draw on 用自己的资源可以依靠

take time off 休息

end up 最终…

academic qualifications 学术资质

essential adj. 必要的，必需的

reasonable career 还行的职业

broaden their horizons 扩展他们的视野

get a clear perspective 获得清晰的认知

第一段：复述文章主题+引出论点 典型的大作文文章开篇，中规中矩，不失为实战中最好用也是最稳妥的写法。

词汇学习：on the face of sth. 从表面看

句子学习：文中：It is true that many parents purchase a multitude of playthings for their offspring. “purchase a multitude” -可用来直接替换三俗词”have different views towards” 用法完全一致。

另文中：Whether or not this is a good thing for the child, is a moot point. “moot”一次解释为有争议的，悬而未决的。此处用法可以完美替代通俗句型whether … , is widely debated.

第二段：主题句+理由分析 此写法常见于各类考官范文，主题句直接清晰的点明此段论述主题，然后围绕此主题进行展开。玩具有助于孩子身体，智力的发展同时兼具教育意义

相关词句学习：optimum brain development 开发大脑

hand-eye coordination 眼手协调

colour recognition 颜色识别

sth. Is designed to be educational as well as fun 寓教于乐

speed children’s acquisition of numbers or the alphabet 加速孩子对数字和字母的认知

第三段： 主题句+理由分析 此段结构同第二段，依旧是常见的正文段写作结构。而且从篇幅上看此段为考官的立场所在，玩具的弊大于利。所以笔者在此在此强调，一般双边分析的文章建议大家以第三段来奠定文章基调。

理由整理：spoil their children 宠坏孩子

concentration span may suffer 集中力下降

too many tempting objects 诱惑太多

become targets of envy from classmates 被妒忌

be dangerous for infants to suck on or ingest 有误事的风险

词汇学习：multiple 许多，可替换“many”

detrimental 有害的， 可替换“harmful”

pitfall 缺点，可替换“drawback”

be perceived as 被认为，可替换“be regard as”

句子学习：文中：For one，wealthy parents might spoil their son or daughter by showering him/her with toys, resulting in a negative effect on the child’s character. 句中考官形象的使用了shower 一次写出了给孩子提供了大量的玩具。shower sb. with sth. 可替换“give sb. a large number of …”, 同时考官用了resulting in 一词的非谓语结构引导结果。此写法笔者在前几期的文章中反复强调的重点句型。

第四段： 陈述观点。

句子学习：It is clear then that this situation is not as straightforward as it first appears. 此句几乎可以算是万能句，表示情况并不如看起来那么简单。几乎可以用于各种雅思与论文中。

以上就是小站老师为雅思考生们带来剑桥雅思10G类写作考官范文解析，希望能给雅思考生们带来帮助，不过雅思写作的唯一提升方法就是多写哦。

Describe a shop you like to go to.

what shop it is

what it sells (or, what you usually buy there)

when you first started going to this shop (or, how you came to know about this shop)

and explain why you like (to go to) this shop.

前考官范文：

Well, it took me a few moments to decide on which shop to talk about, because I actually like going to quite a number of different shops around my hometown, but possibly my favourite is H&M, so that's the one I'm gonna describe.

Firstly then, with regard to what it sells, well I'm not sure if you're familiar with H&M, but it's basically a mid-end clothes shop which sells a variety of women's and men's clothing, mostly geared towards young adults like myself. And as well as clothing, the shop also has a small accessories section for women, with things like hair bands, bracelets and earrings, but the main focus is definitely on clothes.

Anyway, as for when I first started going to this shop, well to be totally honest with you, I'm really not that sure, but off the top of my head, I guess I must have first started shopping there two or three years ago, round about the time I was in high school, because I seem to vaguely remember one of my high-school classmates telling me about it, and how good it was.

So that's kind of how I got to know about H&M, and finally, regarding why I like shopping there, well I suppose it's really a combination of reasons, one of which would be that the clothes there, on the whole, tend to be quite fashionable and trendy, unlike the stuff I see in many other shops, and the clothes are pretty simple in style, which is exactly what I like. So that's one thing, and I guess another reason would be that everything there is really good-value, and just to give you an example, a decent pair of jeans there costs around three hundred yuan, whereas a similar pair at another shop would probably set you back a thousand yuan or so, and in terms of quality, well, there's really not that much difference between H&M's clothes and the higher-end brands, but you're paying considerably less.

So yeah, I would say these are, more or less, the main reasons why I like shopping there, and I would probably go so far as saying it's become one of the most popular clothes shops here in my hometown, and I just hope they continue to keep their prices as low as they are!

That's pretty much it then, so thanks for listening.

题目：Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

考官范文：

People have differing views with regard to the question of how to make our roads safer. In my view, both punishments and a range of other measures can be used together to promote better driving habits.

On the one hand, strict punishments can certainly help to encourage people to drive more safely. Penalties for dangerous drivers can act as a deterrent, meaning that people avoid repeating the same offence. There are various types of driving penalty, such as small fines, licence suspension, driver awareness courses, and even prison sentences. The aim of these punishments is to show dangerous drivers that their actions have negative consequences. As a result, we would hope that drivers become more disciplined and alert, and that they follow the rules more carefully.

On the other hand, I believe that safe driving can be promoted in several different ways that do

not punish drivers. Firstly, it is vitally important to educate people properly before they start to drive, and this could be done in schools or even as part of an extended or more difficult driving test. Secondly, more attention could be paid to safe road design. For example, signs can be used to warn people, speed bumps and road bends can be added to calm traffic, and speed cameras can help to deter people from driving too quickly. Finally, governments or local councils could reduce road accidents by investing in better public transport, which would mean that fewer people would need to travel by car.

In conclusion, while punishments can help to prevent bad driving, I believe that other road safety measures should also be introduced.

是的，所有剑桥后面的考官范文都是雅思写作最好的作文范本

范文如下：happiness is very difficult to define,because it means so many different things to different some people link happiness to wealth and material success,others think it lies in emotions and loving personal others think that spiritual paths,rather than either the material world or relationships with people,are the only way to true people interpret happiness for themselves in so many differen ways,it is difficult to give any definition that is ture for there are different kinds of happiness for different individuals then the first step in achieving it would be to have a degree of person needs to know who he or she is before being able to know what it is that makes him or her course,factors such as loving relationships,good health,the skill to earn a living and a peaceful environment all contribute to our happiness this does not mean that people without these conditions cannot be think an ability to keep clear perspectives in life is a more essential factor in achieving that i mean an ability to have a clear sense of what is important in our lives(the welfare of our families,the quality of our relationships,making other people happy,etc.)and what is not(a problem at work,getting annoyed about trivial things,etc.).全是手工输入的哦，希望对你有所帮助

Describe your first mobile phone.

You should say:

When you got it

How you got it

What you used it for

And explain how you felt when you got it.

考官参考范文：

Ok right then, I’m gonna tell you a little bit about my first mobile phone, or at least as much as I can remember anyway, because I think it was about seven or eight years ago when I first got one, so my memory’s a bit sketchy.

Anyway, in terms of how I came to getting my first mobile, well basically, I had kind of been going on at my mum for quite a while to get me one, but she kept saying, quite rightly, that I was too young and didn’t really need one. But when I hit the age of about 15, I think it was, she finally relented, and took me to the shops to choose one.

So uh, yeah, I remember at the time that neither of us knew much about mobiles, so when we walked into the shop, we just asked the sales assistant there to recommend us one. And I think I’m right in saying that we ended up choosing the cheapest and most basic phone they had, simply because I wasn’t really interested in having loads of functions, you know, all I wanted to use it for was to call and text people.

So that’s how got I it, and um…what else is there to say, uh…. Oh yeah, as for how I felt when I got it, well, in actual fact, I didn’t feel overly excited or anything, you know, it was really just a feeling of, um… what’s the word, umm….. I guess you could say it was like, um, a stronger sense of independence that I felt, um, as well as gratitude to my mum, of course, for giving it to me!

And I took pretty good care of it, you know, I even spent, like, 200 rmb on a leather case to go around it, and it lasted a pretty long time. I think I used it for something like 3 or four years before moving on to a better one. And I think I’ve still got it stored in a drawer somewhere at home. So uh, yeah that’s it. Thanks for listening.