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英语新高考读后续写范文 第1篇
①The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
②A smile of understanding flashed across his face.他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。
③A ripple of excitement ran through them.一阵激动声穿过他们。
④Laughter lingered around the room.笑声在房间里萦绕。
⑤His eyes twinkled with pleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。
⑥A wild gaiety took hold of her.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。
⑦Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光,嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。
⑧I was wild with joy.我欣喜若狂。
⑨I was pleased beyond description.我高兴得难以形容。
⑩She wore a shining smile on her face.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
英语新高考读后续写范文 第2篇
我们可以看到,在续写部分给出的两句话是,as the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared。这就相当于出题人告诉了我们:父亲的出现,对于整件事情的推动作用是相当大的,所以我们在续写的过程中,就一定要把父亲的作用体现出来。在最后一句话中写的twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up,这里就给我们抛出了另一个需要解决的问题,就是早饭究竟是谁做的,怎么做的?
The porridge boiled over and put out the fire. The stove was a mess now. The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 这些都是他们在准备惊喜的过程中遇到的问题,所以我们要做的就是解决问题,帮助他们solve those problems and develop some new ideas。
在情节的设计上,father的出现至关重要,他需要帮孩子们解决做早餐的问题,How?Why?这两个问题都是我们写作的切入点,第一段写如何解决问题,第二段写妈妈看到这个惊喜后的态度就OK啦。
英语新高考读后续写范文 第3篇
1)第一句展现情绪:面对矛盾,本能反应(紧扣一个关键词);
2)第二句补充细节:进一步解释描写本能反应;
3)第三句试图改变:个人的努力或借助外界;
4)第四句黄天不负:事情有了转机,并抱有希望,感到欣慰;
5)第五句再度失望:但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题(用第一人称视角写第三人称的做法);
6)第六句再次转机:突然有了一个想法(一句话概括想法);
7)第七句皆大欢喜:过了一段时间;事情有了最后的转折;
8)第八句首尾呼应:总结前文,升华主题(紧扣两个关键词)。
9)整体句式特点
Getting to Know the World outside the Campus It is necessary for college students to know the world outside the campus. This is because in this “Information Age” the society is developing so fast that we should keep pace with the progress of the outside world. Therefore, without knowledge of the outside world, it will be difficult for us to secure an ideal job after graduation; it will be more difficult for us to succeed in the near future. How to know the outside world? First of all, we should be well informed about what is happening around us with the help of mass media: radios, televisions, newspapers, the Internet, and so on. Moreover, we should do more practical social services so as to cultivate our social skills, widen our eyesight and enrich our social experience.
As for me, I plan to know the outside world in two aspects: study first to have a good command of knowledge. At the same time, I intend to hold a temporary job to know more about the outside world.
1.中国下岗工人的现状和原因。
2.解决此间题的方法。
3.你的观点。
Re-employment of Laid-off Workers
As we oil know, there are more and more laid-off workers in China now mainly because of the rapid changes in the economic reform. Among them are the old and the young, men and women, and even some well-educated graduates. What's more, with more and more workers being laid-off, lots of social problems have appeared.
As a result, the issue of re-employment of the laid-off workers has become one of the hot topics and drawn much attention from governments at all levels. A number of solutions are being offered. First of all, re-training programs should be organized to help the laid-off workers to learn new skills to help them keep up with the changing society. Besides, our government should take some necessary measures to create
more new opportunities of employment for these peopie. Finally, colleges and universities should reform their courses to adapt to the development of economy so as to provide qualified studens to meet the needs of society.
In my opinion, solving the problem of re-employment of laid-off workers needs the effort of the whole society, including our government, the laid-off workers themselves and all those who are ready to offer their help, Moreover, the lay-off workers, especially the well-educated graduates, should lower their standards before looking for satisfying jobs.
Saying “thank you” is not easy for Chinese people, because they are less to express their feelings. When we learn a foreign language, “thank you” is probably the first thing to learn, it is important to make a good impression upon other people, especially across cultural communication.
说“谢谢”对于中国人来说不容易,因为他们很少表达自己的情感。当我们学一门外语时,说“谢谢”很可能是第一件要学得事情,这对于给别人好印象很重要,特别是跨文化交流。
So, what exactly are we supposed to say when feel grateful to others, sometimes thank you maybe not good enough or it may distance the communication. For instance, when we are helped by others, if they are strangers, “thank you” would be appropriate, but if they are someone who we are so familiar with, then saying thank you in Chinasounds a little weird, they will think you don’t treat them as friends. So what is the better way to express your gratitude? We can buy them a drink or invite them to have dinner at home, it also promote your intimacy.
因此,当我们对感激别人的时候,应该说点什么呢,有时候谢谢可能会诚意不够或者会疏远彼此。比如,当我们受到别人的帮助的时候,如果对方是陌生人,“谢谢”就合适了,但是如果他们是我们认识的人,说谢谢在中国来讲有点奇怪,对方会觉得你没有把他们当做朋友。所以最好的表达感谢的方式是什么?我们可以请他们喝一杯或者请他们来家里面吃一顿,这样也能增进感情。
“Thank you” can be useful, as it is able to build a bridge for people to communicate, Chinese people are not get used to expressing gratitude directly, while the western people prefer the directly way, that’s cultural difference. I suggest people saying out“thank you” naturally, making it a habit.
“谢谢”很有用,因为它能建造一座桥梁,让人们交流。中国人不习惯直接表达感激之情,然而西方人就喜欢直接的方式,这也是文化的不同。我建议人们自然地说出“谢谢”,让这成为一种习惯。
When it comes to later marriage, people’s opinions vary enormously. We know that as a graduate student, later marriage would be a problem for us after we graduated, especially girls.
Our attitude towards later marriage becomes gradually rational and mature. We know that love is not just holding hands and walking down the street, Marriage is how Love can make people become altruistic. From my perspective, it is immaturity that leads to this phenomenon. Firstly young adults are not financially prepared to hasten into marriage. The economic burden will likely put a strain onto the couple's relationship, leading possibly to breaches, or worse, separation. Secondly young adults have not attained the level of maturity to raise children. They are often unaware of the responsibilities and sacrifices that one needs to make in order to start a family of one's own. Thirdly statistics are good indicators for the instability and short life spans of premature marriages. Only Only in this way can we embrace a happy and brilliant future.
One day, Joe is become a cowboy. He is happy very much, and Appry their childrens are happy. But Daren is not happy, he is very sad. Why does he sad? Because his father bacome a cowboy, he want to become a cowboy, too. but he is 15 years old, he is so young, so he can not become a cowboy.
“Hello, brother.” Manju says, “You look like not good. Why are you not happy? Our father become a cowboy! It’s so cool!”
“Yes, it’s so cool. So I want to become a cowboy, too.” Daren says.
“Oh, but you are so young.” Manju says. “I want to become a teachers can teach students, that’s so cool, too.”
“No, the cowboy is cool.” Daren is sad. He wants to go outside. Joe know Daren wants to become a cowboy, so he says: “Hi, my good son. Do you want to become a cowboy?”
“Yes, dad.”
“OK. If you are 18 years old. You can. But now you can’t. But I can teach you.”
“Really, dad? You can teach me? Oh! I am very happy!” Daren is jumping.
“What shell we do?”
“Thatl’s a secret.”
With the approach of Shanghai World Expo,what has caused the public concern is whether the local government should follow Beijing to take strict measures to restrict the use of private cars during the Olympics to solve the serious traffic problems.
Shanghai experts have voiced different opinions about it,I hold that current traffic situation should be ,as more and more private cars flood into cities,city services and facilities have been strained to a breaking ,the host city of the Expo,has been exposed not only to the problem of increasing population,but to the problem of the overcrowded second problem is the physical growing number of private cars,whose exhaust sends huge quantities of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere,makes the air of cities unbreathable.
All the action the committee will adopt just reflects the theme of 2010 Shanghai World Expo^v^Better cities,better lives^v^.So,what’s your choice?
英语新高考读后续写范文 第4篇
①Touched deeply/immensely, we…被深深感动,我们…
②Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈眶,表示衷心的感谢。
③With tears streaming down her face, she... 泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来,...
Why is it so important to learn English?Do you think it would be fun to have access to information that other people can't get?Talk and write letters to interesting people that others can't communicate with?Impress people around you whenever you opened your mouth?Make big jumps in your career,leaving others miles behind?You can get all these if you speak English language is the international language meaning 60% of the worlds population are speaking in means that we can communicate well if we do know how to speak the will help you gain friends not just locally but it will open some doors for you to venture on other countries like UK.,USA,and the likes to spend either vacation or for studying the instructions given in some appliances,gadgets,equipments,food labels and etc were mostly written in you will get better understanding of what is going finally,English is one of the most frequently used languages in the world.
Snow floated down, sprinkled on the earth. Fuzzy throughout the world. What a beautiful little snowflake! As sacred to give people gifts on here on earth. Warm everyone's heart. And like the noble white swan, jitter white wings, landed on earth. Light snow flowers larger, dense, sprinkled on the flowers, trees, issued a ^v^rustling^v^ sound, like a beautiful, beautiful song in the snow.
Light snow flower more the more thick, like the countless white petals fall down and fly in the earth. Later, under the snow, the greater the light snow flower in the air you pull me pull, you hug me, I hold you tight, how close! The whole world into a white, very beautiful. As snow, gently stroking the earth, glowing through the every corner of the earth, the earth on the silver plating. This charming snowflakes, like white castle danced in the air. And as they have shed the petals, flying. The goose feather snow, warm everyone's winter, warm everyone's heart, make this better world is becoming more perfect...
英语新高考读后续写范文 第5篇
虽说读后续写没有字数限制,但是考虑到字的大小与整体篇幅限制,一般两个波折即可,如事态变坏一个转折,最后事态好转一个转折即可。侧重人物矛盾与心理冲突,比如两人之间的猜忌,后重归于好,类似小学生作文。
Sports do us good in many respects.
It goes without saying that taking exercises can build up our physical strength. In collective sports like basketball, volleyball, or football, we will learn the importance of cooperation. While taking part in sports game, we will try our best to win and arouse ourselves the competitive spirit. Sports can also help us relax after a period of exhausting work. However, as the saying goes, ^v^there are two sides to everything^v^, and sports is without exception. We may hurt other players or ourselves if we are not careful enough when participating in sports activities. What's more, excessive or severe training can do harm to our health.
My participation in sports tells me that sports can make us healthy both physically and psychologically. It is also a good way for people to know each other and can promote friendship between people. So long as we are carefully enough, sports can do us nothing but good.
On New Year's Eve,our class had a party. The atmosphere was good. It was out of the ordinary from the very begining. The boy student from one bedroom gave an unusual performance. We saw a boy named Li Xinmin turn off all the lights in a sudden snap. Then with three resounding crow of a cock echoing in the hall,the hall was again brightly lit in a snap.
Then,the representative of the bedroom Zhu Guozhang asked us to guess a line of a poem related to the above situation. He added that Li Xinmin alone was born in the year of the dog and the other three were all born in the year of the chicken. They left us all in confusion. And it was our monitor who was quickwittedHe shouted our,
^v^The day breaks as the cock crows three times at dawn.^v^ The hall After that,they had another item. This time Li Xinmin was placed in the middle of the circle. While he was standing there,the other three stood around him,each bowing down to him at an angle of 120 degrees. It was an idiom. This time I got it right:^v^The dog stands out among a group of chickens.^v^
最近,很多中学生都纷纷开通了自己的微博。一方面,微博可以作为展示自己的窗口,可以释放学习压力,另一方面,很多同学成了微博控,影响了学习和生活。请根据提示写一篇英语作文:
1.微博在今天人们生活中的地位越来越不可替代
2.微博也难免产生负面影响
3.我的看法……
英语新高考读后续写范文 第6篇
这里给大家提供1个范文,可以看一看范文的行文思路:
我把范文里面的闪光点用黄色标注出来,同学们可以看一下其中的句式词汇的表达和应用究竟有怎样的特点。
Young university students are sensible to fashions. Some are keen on following fashions: they use mobile phones of the latest style; they wear stylish clothes; they enjoy popular music.
Some people are not happy with this phenomenon. They argue that university students should focus on studies rather than on fashions. They say fashions cost so much that university students cannot afford them. Some students follow fashions crazily, for fear of losing face. Fashions have caused much trouble on campus.
However, others may hold different opinions. They say fashions can drive students to work harder for a better life and broaden their horizons, which is essential for their future development.
I understand those students who follow fashions, but they must be responsible and not go to extremes. If their family is poor, there is no need for them to have such luxurious hobbies.
Never think you will never be detected, when you want to tell a lie. The chances are, sooner or later, your lie witt be found out and it will then expose you to shame. Telling a lie is morally wrong. Besides, there are many disadvantages lying in the way of a liar. First, he has to have a good memory, lest he contradicts at one time what he said in another.
Second, he is always annoyed by his conscience, because he is in constant fear that his falsehood may be found out. Third, a liar is never trusted and respected by others. The result may be that his words, even when he speaks the truth, are not believed. Fourth and the last, once a person has told a lie, he cannot help telling another in order to conceal the first, and then a third and a fourth, until lying becomes ahabit. After that, he may say something untrue even when he wishes to speak the truth. The disadvantages resulting from telling a lie are too many to be listed. The above are just some of the obvious ones.
If you want to be free from these annoyances, if you want to be a trustworthy person, never tell a lie.
My Mother isa kind and gentle woman. She is always very gentle. She takesgood care of her children and keeps them all at school.
I have one brother and two sistets. So she gets four children in all. Shegives us every comfort.
We all love her and she loves us also.
My mother has too much to do in bringing us up.
As our family is too poor to keep a servant, my mother has always to dovery much work.
She gets up very early and sleeps very late every day.
She works hard, yet without is also a thrifty, andindustrious woman.
She saves every cent that she can and keeps everything in order.
As she has been busy eversince she was young, she looks older than shereally is.
Her face is wrinkled, her hair becomes silver white, but she works as hardas ever.
Often she says to us, ^v^work while you work, play while you play.
If you do not work, you will become lazy and of no use to society.^v^ Whatpiece of good advice this is! We must worth it well and always keep it in ourmind.
By the light of the setting sun, without any word, Tom and I were sitting by the lake that shone like glass. Because our hearts filled with sadness, the birds seemed not to want to sing.
The last three years have seen the deep friendship between Tom and me. Thinking about the days when we studied and grew up together, we couldn’t help hugging.
At first, I got to know Tom through playing basketball. He was fond of basketball, which left an impression on me.
Unluckily, I got injured in one basketball match, which made me want to give up playing basketball. Tom encouraged me not to give up my dream of becoming a famous basketball player.
He taught me how to protect myself in games, so I gradually rebuilt confidence. Finally, friendship was built in our hearts deeply.
However, the three-year life at junior middle school was going to be at an end. Now, we must be apart. By the light of setting sun, sadness spread in our hearts.
The thing which we could do is what we would like to do. I still keep the friendship as a treasure in my mind.
Whenever I heard this song, I remembered my happy family. I am like a grass, long in the earth, the earth is the mother, the sky is the father, I am in the arms of my father and mother, slowly grow up. I am lonely, my mother will find many good friends to accompany me, such as: squirrel brother, flower sister and leaves brother ... ... I want to drink water, my father will rain, let me and my friends drink enough, if I want Sun, my father will be out of the sun.
From my picture you can see it clearly.
You see, a little girl with a disheveled hair, holding a bear in your hand, can you guess it? This is me. My right is my father, he is very strong, every Sunday at noon to see boxing, but my father can be hardworking, every morning at five o'clock to do breakfast. My left is a good mother, she is also very hard, housework is mostly mother to do.
My photo is the mother to marry the tenth anniversary of the commemorative photos.
Classmates, do you like our photos? Like to go to my house to see it!
The Impact of the Internet on the Way People Communicate
Due to the wide use of puters and the development of Internet, more and more people like to chat on the Internet. We tend to pay more attention to electronic munication than to face-to-face contact.
As electronic munication is not limited by space, we can chat with others where there is Internet with our tools such as puters, mobile phones and pads. However, when we chat with others online, we cannot express our feelings fully. Just as the picture shows, the parents cannot touch or hug their child. We know that body language plays an important role in our
munication, but the electronic munication cannot do this. For example, when we are sad, we need more love and warmth, a real hug from our parents or friends can mean much more to us than just words through electronic munication.
Therefore, though electronic munication brings convenience to our life, I still don?t think the electronic munication can replace face-to-face contact.
英语新高考读后续写范文 第7篇
sb. felt a great sense of + 情绪名词 + welling up in somebody’ s heart and surging through sb.表示“某人感到一股强烈的 ...... 在内心升腾、奔涌。”
高考续写是在词汇量的基础上进行提高的,当然我们完全不可能每一个单词都认识,但是我们完全可以通过关键词来进行把握文意,尽量不偏离主题取得高分。
祝点赞此篇回答的小伙伴续写作文都取得高分。
In the world of detective novels, Sherlock Holmes is undoubtedly the most famous one. But for me, the greatest detective in novels is Hercule Poirot, a little Belgian who always uses his little grey cells to find the truth.
I really appreciate him for various reasons, such as his having an insight into other people's psychology, his understanding on hunman nature and his being merciful. But most improtant thing is that he looks more like a real human being, compared with Holmes or other legend detectives. He has such a funny appearance, an egg-shaped head and exaggerated moustache . He enjoys delicious cuisine and focuses on his own dressing. He is always humor and likes to mock himself. he prefers to stay with young peole for being attracted by their vigor and energy. And there are still so many lovely features of him I can list.
Anyway, I like him and appreciate him. I always get touched by the philosophy of life in his storys. Hercule Poirot is indeed my favourite detective.
第一节 (满分15分)
(回忆版) 假定你是校广播站英语节目“talk and talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写封邮件邀请她参加学校的电台访谈。
1. 节目介绍;
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
第二节 (满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(回忆版) 续写故事梗概:比赛之前,一个患病的孩子因为紧张怕他人嘲笑,犹豫不想参加比赛
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
1.通读全文,读懂原文
通读全文首先要解决好五个W和一个H的问题,即理清人物who、地点where、时间when、事件what、原因why及怎样发展how。
2.构思情节,谋篇布局
按照原文中事件发生的逻辑性,构思好情节发展,这个发展须符合情节内在的逻辑。因为这不是写科幻小说,不是写神话,因此应该符合现实发生的真实性。所以这个环节的主要任务是谋篇布局。布局谋篇最关键应利用好两方面的信息:十个标有下划线的关键词语。
英语新高考读后续写范文 第8篇
读后续写的词汇得分点除了一般的名词、形容词、副词之外,最重要的是高级动词!因为续写侧重叙事,里面涉及到的人的动作是非常多的,比如cry,这就过于简单,要侧重细节描写,to show, not to tell, 高分作文一般就会写,With shoulders shivering, her tears cannot help streaming down her face.她的双肩哆哆嗦嗦,眼泪情不自禁的从她脸上流下来。所以类似表现喜怒哀乐的情况,都要事先做好准备(注意,两三句即可,但这两三句一定要是最佳句,如句式,高级词汇都要是最好的,熟记于心,一直用即可),侧重刻画描写,脸,手,眼睛都可以描写。
英语新高考读后续写范文 第9篇
结合我的思路分析,大体判读文章是发生在家庭中的,并且是在母亲节的时候为母亲提供的礼物,我们就可以get到文章中想要表述的点,其实就是the love between families。而文章中表述这份爱的具象化描述就是 a surprise。对于我们而言,我们就要去抓住究竟这个surprise是什么?是谁提供给谁的?过程当中,是否接受了谁的帮助?
根据这个思路去原文中仔细阅读,抓住续写重点。我们可以看到,原文当中以第三人称的角度来叙述故事,讲述了一对双胞胎在母亲节的时候为妈妈做早餐,送上一份惊喜的礼物的故事。
英语新高考读后续写范文 第10篇
We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. “ David, you are an ambitious young man full of enthusiasm and vitality.” I held his hands tightly, “ Just look at my eyes. Trust me!” David stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks. “ Miss, with the brain disease, I had thought I did not practise well enough to participate in the competition so that I am afraid of being laughed at.” David felt frustrated and hopeless. I was absolutely understanding what he felt in his mind. “ Boy, you have done well and your future is very promising.” David looked at me, with his eyes twinkled with excitement, and stood up just like a superman in front of me.
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. As the bell rang, David ran as fast as he could like a wild horse running in the filed. In the first round, David fell behind others about 5 meters. But bathed in a competitive atmosphere, he was in high spirits and felt a sudden strength inside him. In the last 50 meters, seeing David try his best to rush for the finishing line, I was nervous and had my heart in my mouth. When the host announced that David won the 3d prize, he was wild with delight, waving to me with joy and sweetness.
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We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. His head stooped spiritlessly and he seemed to be crying."You know the team needs you, don't you, David?”my words broke the silence.“I don't want to let them down, sir. I couldn't live with myself," he whispered, still hanging his head in frustration."You know that by not running you will disappoint them all? Don't you want to run?”I asked.“More than anything but the conditions are so difficult and the forest so dense that I'm afraid I won't make it,”he answered, still looking at the ground.“You’ll never know unless you try!" David stood up and walked away still without looking at me, a determined look on his face.
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. The starting gun fired, and they were off. All the runners contested for the lead, just with David struggling to keep up. Unluckily, he slipped over. Without hesitation, he picked himself up and plodded off after the others into the forest waited at the finishing line. All the runners raced in but no sign of David. One of the boys said David had fallen a couple of times. After a long time, David emerged from the forest, mud-splattered, bruised and clearly suffering. He refused any help and made his way to the finish line. To his astonishment all the other runners had waited and applauded and cheered him. Then for the first time that day his big toothy smile broke across his mud-streaked face as he was surrounded by his team.
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We sat next to each other, but David wouldn’ t look at me. He buried his head into his arms and couldn’ t help sobbing. “ Come on, you can do it.” I whispered to her in a soft voice and patted his shoulder gently. “ Really ? “ he suddenly jumped to his feet and shouted in a trembling voice. His eyes were shining with hope. At that moment, I showed the photo in my cellphone with her. In the photo, he was running as fast as he could with all the other boys on the playground. The bright smiles, the loud cheers ,the sweaty face as well as the determination to win victory suddenly crowded into his mind. Without hesitation, he wiped away the tears and struggled to his feet to embrace the challenge.
I watched as David moved up to the Starting line with the other runners. I yelled with a sense of pride. In the distance , David was running as fast as his disabled leg could carry him. The gentle breeze and singing birds seem to cheer for him. Unfortunately, David tripped over by a stone. “ Oh, my God’ I signed and hurried to him. To my surprise, my dear friend gritted his teeth, ignored the bleeding knee and gathered all his strength to stand up and dashed to the finishing line. “ What a brave boy” ! I signed and hugged him tightly with teary eyes.
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We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’ t look at me. I asked him, “ Why not run?” He stuttered, “ I-I don’ t know, looking at the crowds. A few seconds later, several words came out of his mouth, “ Maybe afraid of being laughed .” “ But you have practiced so hard recently” , I blurt out, “ Think about the efforts you have made. But of course, it’ s your choice. Guess what? I don’ t think it is a good reason. You know, there are always someone who don’ t like us. The point is whether you want to do it yourself. Just think about it.” It was silence again between us. David was biting his mouth, looking at the distance again. A few minutes later, he stood up and uttered the words, “ I would like to run.” I nodded smilingly. So, he has made up his mind.
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.David began his running with the starting signal. I was a bit excited when suddenly a shadowy figure fell over. My heart sank. Seeing the small figure, I knew it was David. I ran to him and shouted, “ Get up and run!” The audience around him were also calling, “ Come on ! You can do it.” A few seconds later, he rose and ran again. He disappeared in the distance in no time. I went to the finishing line, waiting eagerly. When the first person crossed the line, lots of other runners finished their running. But no David. I was wondering what might have happened to him when the small shadowy figure appeared again in the distance. “ Well done!” I said to myself. He was approaching the finishing line when I saw the mud in his clothes. He must have gone through a lot all the way. Crossing the line, his usual big smile was there as that sunny day.
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We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. He hung his head, trying to avoid eye contact with me. It was a tricky moment, calling for a good choice of words. Having thought it over,I mentioned some events which won people's praise for his determination and face began to added that even the judges thumbed up at him. The whistle went off and the competitors began to take their places. To my joy, David slowly rose to his feet.
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. David stood firmly in his position, ignoring anything forward without balance, he was left behind. However, when he came into sight, the spectators burst into thunderous cheers and by the enthusiasm and encouragement, David quickened his pace in high spirits. It turned out that he achieved his best record ever. Seeing his confident smiles,I sighed in relief. With the power to conquer himself, he can conquer anything on the way to a promising future.
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We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. A flood of sympathy and sadness emerged in my heart. I tapped him on the shoulder and pulled him into my arm. At that moment, David's classmates approached him and said, "Let's run together."When David saw them, memories of playing and exercising with them flashed into his mind. There is no denying that they all regard David as their friend. David looked up at us, a pleasurable and relaxing smile appeared at the corners of his mouth.
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other rwnners. As the gun rang out, David and other runners began to run. His small body rocked from side to side as he swung his feet forward. His legs were trembling and drops of sweat were running down his cheeks. He held his fists, gritted his teeth and kept running. When he finished, everyone cheered for him and expressed their respect. Never had I expected that my acts could make such a difference to lamp is lighted and my heart is warmed as well.
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We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. He buriedhis face in his arms and began to a split second of pause,I put one hand on his shoulder gently, reached the other out to him and said in an inspiring voice,"You can make it, David! We are all looking forward to your performance."He raised his head, looking at me with confidence in his eyes. For a moment he hesitated, but the idea of beating himself made him gather all his courage to take my hand. Then I nodded to him, giving him a bigbright smile.
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. He took a deep breath and calmed himself soon as the event began, everyone rushed to the head of the team, leaving David's small figure behind, who swung his body side to side. Eventually, he gathered all his strength and struggled his way to the finishing line. At that moment, all his classmates and even other schools' students ran to embrace him and cheered for him. Seeing what was happening in front of him, he flashed that familiar big toothy smile again. Needless to say, David was filled with so much encouragement and his heart was actually lit up by this event.
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We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. Depression hung over him like a heavy dark cloud and tears welled up in his eyes. I patted him on the shoulder gently, gave him an encouraging look and ventured in a soft voice, "You are a regular boy, David. Maybe you were born with some physical defects, but your strong determination will cover the shortages." After a split second of pause, David nodded slightly, tears giving way to the usual big toothy smile. Then he got to his feet. It wasn't long before the race began.
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other rwnners. David took the first step, slowly but firmly. My eyes kept on him from the very beginning to the end. Like each previous practice, though he finished his run long after others, he did complete it. He ran rockily towards me with his confident smile. It was his willpower that enabled him to make such a running miracle. For others, it was just a simple cross-country run. But for David,it was a symbol of strong determination and self-breakthrough.
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We sat dowm next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. He loweredhis head and rubbed his hands."You don't want to give up,do you?"I asked in a soft voice. He nodded with tears in his eyes but still hesitated. Then I showed him some photos, some showing him running every day, and some laughing with hisclassmates. His face lit up and that David, hard-working, determined, full of positive energy,came alive. He looked up at me, promising to find his true self again.
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. He looked back at me and I responded with a bright smile. With the cheers of everyone present, the competition began. At first, students from otherschools whispered and pointed at him. But as time went by, they were overcome by his tough spirit. David finally finished the running, gasping for breath. Despite the last one to reach the finish line, he still earned him admiration and thunderous applause. Everyone is like a flower,some having fragrance,but some long as you bloom, there will be bees and butterflies.
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We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. He loweredhis head and rubbed his hands. Obviously, he was stuck between a rock anda hard place. Trying to break the silence, I tapped him on the shoulder gently."You are special, but that's your uniqueness. Today, you're here to show that uniqueness with all your diligence and determination", I ventured in an encouraging voice. My simple words, spoken from the heart, found their way straight into his. He raised his head and stared into my eyes. I sensed that his dilemma gave way to trust in me, with his eyes twinkling with determination and hope. That familiar David, hard-working,determined, full of positive energy, came back.
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. I clenched my fist and waved at him. He gave me a determined look, as if to say that he would not change his mind. He took a deep breath to calm himself down, then toed the line, ready to run. With a bang, every runner shot like an arrow.At first, everyone's attention was focused on the winner. But as David, the last one,made it to the finishing line, time seemed to stand still. Thunderous applause broke out, with the name David echoing again and again. Maybe if we knew what other people were thinking, we'd know that no one's ordinary.And we all deserve a standing ovation at least once in our lives.
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We sat down next to euch other, but David wouldn't look at me. Depressedand low-spirited, David sat silently with his head dropping. And from time to time, he stole a glance at me as if he had something to say. Noticing this scene,I patted him on the shoulder and said with patience and eagerness, "It's been a long time since you started to prepare for the big cross-country run. You really want to let it go?Just try it!?"While he didn't say a word, I knew there was a decision in his heart.
I watched as Duvid moved up to the starting line with the other runners.With a whistle, everyone rushed held on for a while and then he dragged his legs with inner firmness. What was alarming was that he fell down. Gasping with pain,he forced himself to his feet and with slow,shaky steps, began to silence came a storm of applause. Even if David didn't get a good place, he was still happy. I nodded with satisfaction anda little bit more effortsthumbed up at him. Such is the key to"success"—and determination will create a little bit more miracles.
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We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. It was apparent that he was still hesitant whether he should have a try in running with others. Spotting this, I approached him gradually and told him he was no different from other normal students in my opinion and that doubtlessly he could make it without much difficulty. With my words of encouragement David stood up firmly and went to the join the other runners.
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.In the very beginning he lagged behind others for his strange running style. However, he didn’t lose heart and quit. On the contrary, he sped up little by little and much to the audience’s surprise he was among the first runners who arrived at the finishing line early. Not only were the audience and other students impressed by the fact that David eventually made it in finishing the race, but also they admired him very much for his great determination.
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We sat down next to euch other, but David wouldn't look at me. I knew he was upset. Out of concern, I comforted him with warm words,"You are the very person that is determined and optimistic. Keep it on however challenging the situation is. Do your best instead of caring about others'thoughts."Hearing my inspiring words, David could see the silver lining in the cloud. His longing for success eventually overcame his fear.
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other breathed deeply and then rushed out with all his courage and strength without thinking twice. However, he was still left behind by other students. To us audience's surprise, he didn't give up half way. Exhausted as he was, he still rushed to the finishing line. Applause and cheers broke out as if he was a winner. David felt a sense of achievement welling up in his heart. "Everyone deserves a better version of themselves," as the old saying goes.
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We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me. It was I who broke the silence first. “David, I think it’s not reasonable to quit right now. Do you remember the days when you spent so much time and effort in practicing?” It seemed that my words worked. He lost himself in thought and then turned to me. “Yes, you’re right. What I should focus on is myself not others’ views.” He replied. Meanwhile, the run was going to start soon. David took a deep breath and stood up.
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. Then with the whistle blowing, the run began. Although David couldn’t run as fast as others, he kept a steady speed. Five minutes later, there was a long distance between David and other runners. However, looking at his body rocking from side to side, no one laughed at him. Instead, kids along the road clapped their hands to encourage David. Finally, with strong determination, he reached the finish line. I went over to hug him and everyone present gave him a thumbs-up. How great to see his big toothy smile again!
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We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me. Looking directly at him, I firmly said, “David, it’s your rights to pull out of the competition if you don’t want to run today. But it’s not good enough to do so only because you fear the worst for possible sarcastic comments. There are people like doing these mean things. The real matter is whether you let these few people stop you from pursuing your passion for running. If you want to run, David, then you run.” Several minutes after his taking my words, David said with fierce determination, “I’m gonna run.”
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. After the starting pistol exploded, all the runners sprang into action and ran forwardonly to find David fell on the track from time to time. Then, the small bold figure picked himself up and started again and again. I knew he would with the rhythm of his run, he finally crossed the finish line long after other children. There, he gave me his typical toothy smile, saying, “That was easy!”
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We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at eyes deliberately avoided mine, and his smile also disappeared on the face, with his limbs shaking as weak as leaves. “It” s not the real you, David”, I broke the silence, walked to his front, holding his shoulders and continued, “Listen, David, you have prepared so much for this running, if you want to quit, I will be for you.” David burst into tears. Suddenly ,a group of kids emerged around us. The came up to David, and embraced him and shouted “Cheer up. David, you can do it !” David stopped crying and his face lit up by their encouragement. Turing around, he gave me a smile and walked to the starting line where other kids were ready to start. (124)
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. Start !All the kids disappeared swiftly like lightening into the forest, leaving David staggering and struggling his steps his body was uncontrollable, soon his heels were bleeding, because his shoes were worn out. After a long time, David was still 100 meters away from the finishing line. The path was lined with the coach and other kids in tears, who were informed of the poor body condition of David. No one laughed at him, but cheered up and clapped for him. David was touched and he was stepping forward when he was tripped by a big rock. “ He is bleeding!” cried the other kids. “David! David!David!” the voice became louder and louder until David dragged his leg surpassing the terminal. He did it, with his belief and encouragement and love from everyone present. It was a miracle. His usual big toothy smile would not be absent forever. (150)
故事原结尾
We sat down together on some steps, but David wouldn’t look at me. ( 开始第一段续写处)I quietly said, “David, if you don’t want to run today, no one is going to make you. But if you’re not running because you’re afraid someone is going to laugh, that’s not a good enough reason. There will always be someone who will laugh and say mean things. There are people like that, and that’s just the way it is. The real question is whether you are going to let those few people stop you from doing something you really want to do. Are you going to let them get in your way? If you really want to run, David, then you run!”I held my breath as David took this in. Then he looked at the field and said with a fierce but quiet determination, “I’m gonna run.”
I stood on the sidelines with the excited crowd as David moved up to the starting line. (开始第二段续写)The starter’s gun sounded, and David lurched forward with the other children. But he had only gone a few metres before he tripped and fell flat on the ground. My heart sank. As I started to shout encouragement, other voices around me took up the call. “Come on David, you can do it!” I knew without even looking that these voices were not just those of his schoolmates. They came from parents, teachers and kids from other schools, who quickly understood the courage it took David to attempt this picked himself up and started again. All the other runners had disappeared over the hill. But it didn’t matter. This was David’s run. He had worked for it, and he wouldn’t give up! As long as he was in sight, David heard people calling his waited anxiously by the finish line as the first runners completed the two-and-a-half kilometres of forest trails. Soon all of the other runners had come in and another race had begun. Still no David! I started to feel sick. Had I done the wrong thing? He hadn’t checked out the trail with the other runners. Could he have become lost? Finally, a small figure emerged from the forest. With heels kicking out to the side and his body rocking with the rhythm of his run, David plodded toward the home stretch. He raised his arms in triumph as he crossed the finish line to wild cheers and , when David’s coach slapped him on the back and said proudly, “Good job, David!” he caught my eye, flashed me a toothy grin and said, “That was easy!”At the end of the year, the track coach asked the class to nominate one of their classmates for the athletic award for their grade. Without hesitation the whole class voted for David, saying that no one had worked harder for that award than was an amazing moment at our year-end assembly. The auditorium resounded with cheering and applause when David came forward and received his award for outstanding athletic achievement—from his beaming coach.
英语新高考读后续写范文 第11篇
①He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.他转过身来,眼里充满了恐惧。
②Fear slowly creeps upon her.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。
③She was struck with horror when...她感到恐惧…
④She was choked by fear.她因恐惧而窒息。
⑤Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里,舌头打结。
⑥A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him.他心中涌起一阵恐惧。 / 恐惧淹没了他。
⑦Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated(窒息).她的心跳得厉害,几乎窒息而死。
⑧She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles. 她浑身颤抖,觉得如坐针毡。
英语新高考读后续写范文 第12篇
①He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着,眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。
②I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。
③Her hands were shaking. She was on the verge of tears.她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。
④Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.听到这个消息,他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。
⑤She burst into tears and ran out of the room.她突然哭了起来,跑出了房间。
⑥ She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.她掩面哭泣。
⑦I tried to fight back tears. /My eyes were filled with tears.我努力忍住眼泪。/ 我的眼里充满了泪水。
⑧A frown(皱眉)now stood on his face.他皱起了眉头。
⑨They sat there with glum looks on their faces.他们坐在那里,带着一脸忧郁。⑩The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。
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